Wednesday, January 29, 2014

ESSAY WRITING

STEP ONE:  Purpose
What's the purpose of this essay?  Is it to INFORM an audience, or to ARGUE a point?
If you're ARGUING, you need to pick a stance.  Pro or con?
*Avoid saying, "In my opinion."  We want PROOF, FACTS, and RESEARCH.  Not opinions.

STEP TWO:  Audience
Who will be grading your essay?  A teacher?  A friend?  How will that affect the language that you use?  Avoid immature words that dumb down your writing.
Examples of immature words:  stuff, like like like, 'cause, kinda, etc.

STEP THREE:  Decide on your three main points.  This should happen before you do ANY writing at all.

STEP FOUR:  Create an outline of what you will talk about.  It will look like this:


INTRO
Thesis statement
Three main points

BODY 
Transition word, topic sentence
Facts about your first point

BODY
Transition word, topic sentence
Facts about your second point

BODY
Transition word, topic sentence  
Facts about your last point

CONCLUSION
Three main points
Thesis statement

Now that you know what your three main points are, you can start filling in the outline with your information.  Start with the BODY paragraphs, then do your INTRO and CONCLUSION.  You can't do a proper intro without first knowing where you're going with your body paragraphs.

Monday, January 27, 2014

Spelling Patterns Resource

Spelling Patterns

Essays Intro

RULES

1- An essay should always have 5 paragraphs, UNLESS for some bizarre reason someone asks you for something different.  
If they say, "Write an essay on..." make it 5 paragraphs.  If they say, "Write a multi-paragraph essay about..." make it 5 paragraphs.

2- It looks like this:
INTRODUCTION

BODY
BODY
BODY

CONCLUSION

3- Your introduction tells the reader what you're going to talk about (thesis statement) without saying, "Today, I'm going to tell you about _________."  Cause that's lame.  
     It will also introduce your 3 MAIN POINTS.

4- Your body paragraphs tell us whatever it is you are trying to say.  They should be carefully organized (like our set of dresser drawers, remember???) so that every piece of information goes into its proper place.

5- Your conclusion is crafty.  You must repeat exactly what your intro said, but in a DIFFERENT WAY. So state what you're talking about (thesis statement) and your 3 MAIN POINTS, but don't use the same phrasing as your intro.  Confused yet??  I feel your pain...


Spelling Patterns

Which of these words does NOT fit in with the spelling pattern?

1. Receive
2. Perceive
3. Believe
4. Conceive

1. Autumn
2. Homonym
3. Column
4. Condemn

1. Precious
2. Gracious
3. Ambitious
4. Malicious




Friday, January 24, 2014

Essay Topics

These are the topics that I know for sure are on pioneer.uen.org:

knights       castles       monasteries       stained glass illuminated manuscripts       feudalism       crusades   weapons-trebuchet       knights-chivalry

These are the topics that MAY be on there:

plague       witches       clothing       Olde English     bugs      food      jewels (crown)

TAKEN:
Mark- witches and warlocks
Reagan- castles

BIG SIX Informational Essay Requirements

Required for your essay:
1 encyclopedia source
1 internet source
1 informational book source
1 bibliography (a page that lists where you got all your information)

Pioneer Online Worldbook can count as your encyclopedia source, even though it's on the internet.
Google Drive has an option for you to type in a word like "knights" and search for internet sources on that topic.
You may get your informational book here at Spring Creek's library, or any other library you have access to.

You may use more than 3 sources, but you need AT LEAST the ones mentioned above.

FINAL PRODUCT WILL BE:  A typed, polished, 5-paragraph essay which will use information from all of your three sources. You will cite those sources in a separate bibliography page, stapled at the back.



Wednesday, January 22, 2014

Essay Pretest Instructions

Using the information given to you, write a multi-paragraph essay arguing against keeping exotic cats as pets.

It would be wise to work in this order:
-Read all given material first
-Make a plan of what you're going to write
-Write your essay
-Review it for errors
-Hand it in

You have 60 minutes to complete this assignment.

Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Winner

Tell about a time when you won something.  What did you win, and what did you do to win it?

Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Imagine you opened your own restaurant. Tell the name of your restaurant. Explain what the restaurant looks like, who works there, and what you serve.

Tuesday, January 7, 2014

Dinosaur

Imagine you woke up and saw a dinosaur in your backyard. Write a story telling what you see and do.

Monday, January 6, 2014

The Emperor's New Clothes

Many years ago there was an Emperor so exceedingly fond of new clothes that he spent all his money on being well dressed. He cared nothing about reviewing his soldiers, going to the theatre, or going for a ride in his carriage, except to show off his new clothes. He had a coat for every hour of the day, and instead of saying, as one might, about any other ruler, "The King's in council," here they always said. "The Emperor's in his dressing room."
In the great city where he lived, life was always gay. Every day many strangers came to town, and among them one day came two swindlers. They let it be known they were weavers, and they said they could weave the most magnificent fabrics imaginable. Not only were their colors and patterns uncommonly fine, but clothes made of this cloth had a wonderful way of becoming invisible to anyone who was unfit for his office, or who was unusually stupid.
"Those would be just the clothes for me," thought the Emperor. "If I wore them I would be able to discover which men in my empire are unfit for their posts. And I could tell the wise men from the fools. Yes, I certainly must get some of the stuff woven for me right away." He paid the two swindlers a large sum of money to start work at once.
They set up two looms and pretended to weave, though there was nothing on the looms. All the finest silk and the purest old thread which they demanded went into their traveling bags, while they worked the empty looms far into the night.
"I'd like to know how those weavers are getting on with the cloth," the Emperor thought, but he felt slightly uncomfortable when he remembered that those who were unfit for their position would not be able to see the fabric. It couldn't have been that he doubted himself, yet he thought he'd rather send someone else to see how things were going. The whole town knew about the cloth's peculiar power, and all were impatient to find out how stupid their neighbors were.
"I'll send my honest old minister to the weavers," the Emperor decided. "He'll be the best one to tell me how the material looks, for he's a sensible man and no one does his duty better."
So the honest old minister went to the room where the two swindlers sat working away at their empty looms.
"Heaven help me," he thought as his eyes flew wide open, "I can't see anything at all". But he did not say so.
Both the swindlers begged him to be so kind as to come near to approve the excellent pattern, the beautiful colors. They pointed to the empty looms, and the poor old minister stared as hard as he dared. He couldn't see anything, because there was nothing to see. "Heaven have mercy," he thought. "Can it be that I'm a fool? I'd have never guessed it, and not a soul must know. Am I unfit to be the minister? It would never do to let on that I can't see the cloth."
"Don't hesitate to tell us what you think of it," said one of the weavers.
"Oh, it's beautiful -it's enchanting." The old minister peered through his spectacles. "Such a pattern, what colors!" I'll be sure to tell the Emperor how delighted I am with it."
"We're pleased to hear that," the swindlers said. They proceeded to name all the colors and to explain the intricate pattern. The old minister paid the closest attention, so that he could tell it all to the Emperor. And so he did.
The swindlers at once asked for more money, more silk and gold thread, to get on with the weaving. But it all went into their pockets. Not a thread went into the looms, though they worked at their weaving as hard as ever.
The Emperor presently sent another trustworthy official to see how the work progressed and how soon it would be ready. The same thing happened to him that had happened to the minister. He looked and he looked, but as there was nothing to see in the looms he couldn't see anything.
"Isn't it a beautiful piece of goods?" the swindlers asked him, as they displayed and described their imaginary pattern.
"I know I'm not stupid," the man thought, "so it must be that I'm unworthy of my good office. That's strange. I mustn't let anyone find it out, though." So he praised the material he did not see. He declared he was delighted with the beautiful colors and the exquisite pattern. To the Emperor he said, "It held me spellbound."
All the town was talking of this splendid cloth, and the Emperor wanted to see it for himself while it was still in the looms. Attended by a band of chosen men, among whom were his two old trusted officials-the ones who had been to the weavers-he set out to see the two swindlers. He found them weaving with might and main, but without a thread in their looms.
"Magnificent," said the two officials already duped. "Just look, Your Majesty, what colors! What a design!" They pointed to the empty looms, each supposing that the others could see the stuff.
"What's this?" thought the Emperor. "I can't see anything. This is terrible!
Am I a fool? Am I unfit to be the Emperor? What a thing to happen to me of all people! - Oh! It's very pretty," he said. "It has my highest approval." And he nodded approbation at the empty loom. Nothing could make him say that he couldn't see anything.
His whole retinue stared and stared. One saw no more than another, but they all joined the Emperor in exclaiming, "Oh! It's very pretty," and they advised him to wear clothes made of this wonderful cloth especially for the great procession he was soon to lead. "Magnificent! Excellent! Unsurpassed!" were bandied from mouth to mouth, and everyone did his best to seem well pleased. The Emperor gave each of the swindlers a cross to wear in his buttonhole, and the title of "Sir Weaver."
Before the procession the swindlers sat up all night and burned more than six candles, to show how busy they were finishing the Emperor's new clothes. They pretended to take the cloth off the loom. They made cuts in the air with huge scissors. And at last they said, "Now the Emperor's new clothes are ready for him."
Then the Emperor himself came with his noblest noblemen, and the swindlers each raised an arm as if they were holding something. They said, "These are the trousers, here's the coat, and this is the mantle," naming each garment. "All of them are as light as a spider web. One would almost think he had nothing on, but that's what makes them so fine."
"Exactly," all the noblemen agreed, though they could see nothing, for there was nothing to see.
"If Your Imperial Majesty will condescend to take your clothes off," said the swindlers, "we will help you on with your new ones here in front of the long mirror."
The Emperor undressed, and the swindlers pretended to put his new clothes on him, one garment after another. They took him around the waist and seemed to be fastening something - that was his train-as the Emperor turned round and round before the looking glass.
"How well Your Majesty's new clothes look. Aren't they becoming!" He heard on all sides, "That pattern, so perfect! Those colors, so suitable! It is a magnificent outfit."
Then the minister of public processions announced: "Your Majesty's canopy is waiting outside."
"Well, I'm supposed to be ready," the Emperor said, and turned again for one last look in the mirror. "It is a remarkable fit, isn't it?" He seemed to regard his costume with the greatest interest.
The noblemen who were to carry his train stooped low and reached for the floor as if they were picking up his mantle. Then they pretended to lift and hold it high. They didn't dare admit they had nothing to hold.
So off went the Emperor in procession under his splendid canopy. Everyone in the streets and the windows said, "Oh, how fine are the Emperor's new clothes! Don't they fit him to perfection? And see his long train!" Nobody would confess that he couldn't see anything, for that would prove him either unfit for his position, or a fool. No costume the Emperor had worn before was ever such a complete success.
"But he hasn't got anything on," a little child said.
"Did you ever hear such innocent prattle?" said its father. And one person whispered to another what the child had said, "He hasn't anything on. A child says he hasn't anything on."
"But he hasn't got anything on!" the whole town cried out at last.
The Emperor shivered, for he suspected they were right. But he thought, "This procession has got to go on." So he walked more proudly than ever, as his noblemen held high the train that wasn't there at all.

Friday, January 3, 2014

Lit. Groups

Things Not Seen
Britton, Alyssa R., Kayden, Josh, Mark

Rules
Talon, Dawson, Benson, Hailey

Batboy
Will, Eric, Coop, Gavyn

Iceberg Hermit
Zach, Chance, Micaiah, Tanner

Flying Solo
Emma, Sam, Hannah, Jace

Stargirl
Alyssa B., Reagan, Aubrey, Brycen